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"I love you" were the words you said to me
According to you we were meant to be
So why are you not by my side?
My heart is breaking on the inside
I knew I should have never have trusted you
I knew you were too good to be true
Poem about heartbreak. Not based on personal experience
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LazyEyeCrazyI Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I never knew it would hurt this bad. =(
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nobodys-listening010 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love it. It really speaks to me. I think it reminds me of my ex-boyfriend...I should have been better to him. :( Good job~
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PrincessMiku16 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Amazing!
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zZzTattyiannazZz Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
So True
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WordsUnspoken32 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
I loved this girl so much...we had so much fun when we talked to each other and I thought this was the female version of me..we dated for a while and I started thinking "hey maybe the universe is gonna cut me some slack and let thing just be ok" but then another guy came into the picture..he was everything I wasn't. Strong, muscular, handsome. The girl fell head over heels for him and her friends had already been telling her that I wasn't cute enough for her. I was dumped and she and him started dating..its a high school crush I shouldn't be this devastated but who understands human emotions? My world has been just a pit of black since then..anyone else experience a bad breakup and wanna talk about it with someone they DON'T see in real life? Swing my way.
GREAT PIECE OF LITERATURE!!!
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HolyToni Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"Not cute enough for her"? You don't seem very not-cute to me...
I was just called a "tamagotchi" by my ex-gilfriend who broke up with this "let's just be friends again"-line because I wanted her to pay some attention to me...pfff, I guess it would be kinda easier to be angry at her, but I can't because I don't know any other way for her to be satisfied in a relationship with me when she doesn't love me anymore...whatever.
It's amazing what feelings poems like this can trigger, I hope the author isn't annoyed by all the unlucky love storys under their post ^^"
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Kelsey427 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've spent the last month thinking about this woman I love very much. Speaking to her on occasion. Hangig out a couple times. Loving her since the moment we met.
We've been broken up for a month.
I know it's only a month, but this woman. She brought me back to life after like 13 years. I miss her so much.
Yet, she doens't miss me.
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Silly-Little-Ginger Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I was broken up with yesterday, and this describes exactly what I'm going through
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chobitskitty Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
definitely sounds like what im going thru
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NynyWeenie Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:heart:
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