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December 7, 2007
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"I love you" were the words you said to me
According to you we were meant to be
So why are you not by my side?
My heart is breaking on the inside
I knew I should have never have trusted you
I knew you were too good to be true
Poem about heartbreak. Not based on personal experience
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I love it. It really speaks to me. I think it reminds me of my ex-boyfriend...I should have been better to him. :( Good job~
PrincessMiku16 Jun 26, 2013  Student General Artist
I loved this girl so much...we had so much fun when we talked to each other and I thought this was the female version of me..we dated for a while and I started thinking "hey maybe the universe is gonna cut me some slack and let thing just be ok" but then another guy came into the picture..he was everything I wasn't. Strong, muscular, handsome. The girl fell head over heels for him and her friends had already been telling her that I wasn't cute enough for her. I was dumped and she and him started dating..its a high school crush I shouldn't be this devastated but who understands human emotions? My world has been just a pit of black since then..anyone else experience a bad breakup and wanna talk about it with someone they DON'T see in real life? Swing my way.
HolyToni Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"Not cute enough for her"? You don't seem very not-cute to me...
I was just called a "tamagotchi" by my ex-gilfriend who broke up with this "let's just be friends again"-line because I wanted her to pay some attention to me...pfff, I guess it would be kinda easier to be angry at her, but I can't because I don't know any other way for her to be satisfied in a relationship with me when she doesn't love me anymore...whatever.
It's amazing what feelings poems like this can trigger, I hope the author isn't annoyed by all the unlucky love storys under their post ^^"
Kelsey427 May 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've spent the last month thinking about this woman I love very much. Speaking to her on occasion. Hangig out a couple times. Loving her since the moment we met.
We've been broken up for a month.
I know it's only a month, but this woman. She brought me back to life after like 13 years. I miss her so much.
Yet, she doens't miss me.
Silly-Little-Ginger May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I was broken up with yesterday, and this describes exactly what I'm going through
chobitskitty Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
definitely sounds like what im going thru
NynyWeenie Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I dated this guy for almost a year. He said he loved me. He bought me a promise ring. Said we were going to get married one day. He lied.
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